Week 6: Monday

For our lecture we had a quick talk about our rational and it was a good reminder that we should proofread over our work as it allows clearer communication. So my aim is to get my rational done on Wednesday afternoon so that I am not stressfully doing it on Thursday morning.

In todays studio I came super prepared and managed to print out my booklet correctly this time along with different layouts/spreads. Over the weekend I worked hard to tick off the changes needed to be made from the feedback on Thursday and after talking to Fay she gave me positive feedback and small minor changes that were very realistic.

After talking to Matt I found it helpful however I found that he thought my illustrations weren't very strong and in particular my map need to be fixed however I wanted to continue the style of rough/relaxed line drawings instead of harsh lines. So at this point I am a little confused and stressed to weather I can create new illustrations for everything. Overall though he could see improvements made which was reassuring!

From now to Wednesday afternoon I really need to update my bookwork and make sure I have pro-read and edited my work sufficiently. It will definitely  be a big few days!